Im leaving....Im going...
in search of a life....worth knowing...
Not with my friends or any company...
but just the dark night's symphony...
Watch me..leaving behind my native place...
those relative...and human race....
Hands in my empty pockets...with a feeling truly wealthy...
Every passing moment...heavenly and earthy...
Each footstep taken..added wisdom
to my void thought's kingdom...
Ignorantly comfortable ...missing life's mystery..
Are those sleeping inside...living in the history.....
Im leaving...Im going...
in search of a life....worth knowing...
On a road...on my road..
My zero gravity road....
-Nithin Manakkat
6 comments:
Hmm. Better. Much better phrasing dude. Kind of Melancholy, but still doesn't get you there you know! The idea was very powerful. Work on that now that your phrasing is way better.
Thanks dude,thanks a lot and i will surely try my best next time. :) :)
dude...i dea man...loved it for that...
Zero Gravity Road...
where nothing weighs you down...
nothing holds you back...
\m/
thanks jk....thanks a lot.. :) :)
loved it..simple and deep. u rock
thanks :)
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